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After getting some good critique on how my art is coming along, I decided on improving a tad bit in both line art and coloring/shading to see where it gets me. :aww:

:meow: Please compare to my older works and tell me what you think. If there is something about this one that I could work on in the future, do let me know. <;D Anything to improve on my works, because I do realize they're the slightest flawed. (Not that any of you ever notice that, anyhow ^^; )

Also, if you plan to actually critique this piece or something- Could I ask that you focus only on the Line Art Coloring and Shading itself and NOT the anatomy, please? The anatomy isn't really the focus I have right now, I just want to know how the rest is coming along, alright?

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GreenArcadia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I'd love to critique if you'd like one :> Do you mind if I do a visual critique?
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
I don't mind :aww: Go right ahead! :meow:
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GreenArcadia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
It's finished :> [link]

Hope this helps!
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BlueSoulCookiee Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
First off, let me ask something before the critique. Do you want your art work to look like SEGA's style? Or do you want to draw your own Sonic style?
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
I aim towards drawing my own style. :aww:
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FlameHeadSavvy Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't really leave a critique on your art. Your shading, coloring, and just about everything else is done better than I can do mainly because I'm extremely lazy lol
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Thanks~! :aww:
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FlameHeadSavvy Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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Yukimazan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Wooow! You know how to make art flow like water. Amazing! :clap:
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KairaAethericBeast Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Aww. How cute. 83
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Thanks Kaira~! X3
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KairaAethericBeast Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
No problem. :3
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Mach9thehedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*whistles* With my honest critique on this, you're truely putting in a lot of effort in the right places.
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Thanks~! :w00t:
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Mach9thehedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're very welcome!
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Chuedede Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Critique? Alright... Here goes...

First, the good. The shading is gorgeous, I love the pose, the ears are spot-on and when it comes to drawing clothing, you nailed it. The gloves are perfect and the size of the head in relativity to the body is definitely perfect.

Next, stuff you could improve on (while staying relatively in style). The eyes seem a bit big to me, some parts of the hands/upper body seem stiff to me, and the lower legs could serve to be a tad thinner or shorter.

Overall, I think this is an awesome piece of art and although I can see room for improvement this gets :star::star::star::star::star-empty: in my books.

(Also I'm sorry for critiquing everything overall, I just had too... OCD fail...)
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Ah, Thank you so much for your critique! =D It's alright if you wanted to critique the pic as a whole, It does make it easier for the one critiquing.

I can definately see what you mean, my character art could certainly use some adjustments regarding leg-length and etc.

Although I'm quite understanding of most of the details of your critique, I was just a tad curious on what you had meant when referring to the eyes being a bit big. Is it the eye-frame itself, the irises, or just the eyes in general that could use some fixing? :?

Again thank you so much for the critique! It's so hard to get any when you don't have a PM, y'know? ;)
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Chuedede Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that no-PM feel, bro.

Yeah, the irises in comparison to the size of the eye itself is good, however the eye in itself seems a bit big. ^^; not too good at this critique thing.

XD I do hate not having a PM and I do sympathize with you. TIME TO ENTER CONTESTS! 8D
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YoUrSilEnT-sTaLkEr Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good!, I love your poses, i can only draw one pose xD
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Ahaha, I already know about how dynamic my poses are...
Thanks, though :aww:

It took years just to be able to draw these poses, to be honest! :XD:
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DarcyHedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
looks good ^^
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Thanks Darcy~! =D
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DarcyHedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome ^^
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