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After getting some good critique on how my art is coming along, I decided on improving a tad bit in both line art and coloring/shading to see where it gets me. :aww:

:meow: Please compare to my older works and tell me what you think. If there is something about this one that I could work on in the future, do let me know. <;D Anything to improve on my works, because I do realize they're the slightest flawed. (Not that any of you ever notice that, anyhow ^^; )

Also, if you plan to actually critique this piece or something- Could I ask that you focus only on the Line Art Coloring and Shading itself and NOT the anatomy, please? The anatomy isn't really the focus I have right now, I just want to know how the rest is coming along, alright?

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GreenArcadia Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I'd love to critique if you'd like one :> Do you mind if I do a visual critique?
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
I don't mind :aww: Go right ahead! :meow:
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GreenArcadia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
It's finished :> [link]

Hope this helps!
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BlueSoulCookiee Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
First off, let me ask something before the critique. Do you want your art work to look like SEGA's style? Or do you want to draw your own Sonic style?
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
I aim towards drawing my own style. :aww:
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FlameHeadSavvy Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't really leave a critique on your art. Your shading, coloring, and just about everything else is done better than I can do mainly because I'm extremely lazy lol
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AllyLunarMobian Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Thanks~! :aww:
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FlameHeadSavvy Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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Yukimazan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
Wooow! You know how to make art flow like water. Amazing! :clap:
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KairaAethericBeast Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Aww. How cute. 83
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